Help me..

Uhmm.. im sorta a newb at writing poems, so please read my stuff, rate and place comments.. =)
but please don't be so harsh..T__T

and for those that are willing, please give me tips on how i could improve my stuff.. =)

thanks!

I commented one poem of yours...
and it seemed really good...
are you sure you're a newbie?
=)

*isabel*

Thank you! thank you! thank you!! =D
your comment is very much appreciated!!

and yes, i'm new at this..but i'm trying really hard..[blood and sweat] ;p

thanks!