New Poems.....need to know if they are bad!!!

  • dada20
    18 years ago

    Tell It To My Face
    Come on, come on
    Say it, say it
    Just watch me fall apart and never come back together
    Watch my heart break into 2
    Why did you think that of me?
    Am I really a lie?
    Some times I think that of myself and I dont know why

    If you had so much to say
    Then why did you write this little note
    Why did you just tell it to my face.
    Thats how it felt.
    Because of this it makes me think.
    If you are really my friend you said you were.
    Right now I wont call you by youre name
    I will call you a name the suits you , evil angel

    Hey there evil angel
    Now how does it feel to be at the bottom of a crumbling building?
    Are you starting to see the world, through my eyes?
    Cause if you are I am going to force you to watch even more.
    So you can see why I am upset and so screwed up inside.
    I want you to see the unhindered verison of what everyone sees of me

    If you had so much to say
    Then why did you write this little note
    Why did you just tell it to my face.
    Thats how it felt.
    Because of this it makes me think.
    If you are really my friend you said you were.
    Right now I wont call you by youre name
    I will call you a name the suits you , evil angel

    Everynight I lie awake feeling empty and useless.
    I have taken too many steps back.
    And I can't go forward because of you.

    If you had so much to say
    Then why did you write this little note
    Why did you just tell it to my face.
    Thats how it felt.
    Because of this it makes me think.
    If you are really my friend you said you were.
    Right now I wont call you by youre name
    I will call you a name the suits you , evil angel
    If you had so much to say
    Then why did you write this little note
    Why did you just tell it to my face.
    Thats how it felt.
    Because of this it makes me think.
    If you are really my friend you said you were.
    Right now I wont call you by youre name
    I will call you a name the suits you , evil angel

    My Greatest Mistake
    Hush, hush
    Please dont cry
    Please dont let the tears come out
    Please dont be angry
    I know that I made a mistake
    when you asked me 'am I evil angel?'
    Please, please dont remember that name

    Oh, I did not mean to call you such an unforgiving name
    Please know that I was just trying to past a feeling from the past
    And now that I have I'm greting every second of it
    Once again I have hurt yet another person, I dearly care for

    There are 2 parts of forgiveness, me and you
    For my half I've added the biggest scar on my hear
    So I will feel the pain that you did
    For your half I would leave your mark on me
    Just drive the nail inch by inch so I can feel what I've done

    Oh, I did not mean to call you such an unforgiving name
    Please know that I was just trying to past a feeling from the past
    And now that I have I'm greting every second of it
    Once again I have hurt yet another person, I dearly care for

    I feel deep inside that I may be the real 'evil angel'
    When push comes to shove just push me right back
    Cause I know
    My greatest mistake was leting all my fears out on you

    Oh, I did not mean to call you such an unforgiving name
    Please know that I was just trying to past a feeling from the past
    And now that I have I'm greting every second of it
    Once again I have hurt yet another person, I dearly care for
    Oh, I did not mean to call you such an unforgiving name
    Please know that I was just trying to past a feeling from the past
    And now that I have I'm greting every second of it
    Once again I have hurt yet another person, I dearly care for