Only My 2nd Poem

  • Shauna
    18 years ago

    Hello!
    I have just submitted my 2nd poem..
    I would love some feedback.. Thank You!

    And of course, I will return the favor =)

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  • Jenna
    18 years ago

    I read it VERY good!

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  • Catastrophic Beauty
    18 years ago

    ^^ Agreed. I loved it.

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  • Crystal Gaze
    18 years ago

    Im really impressed:D your very talented. Keep writting:)

    Could you please do.. Her Porcelain Dream's.

    Thanks,
    -- Elly.

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  • Shauna
    18 years ago

    Thanks..But I have to say you way outdid me on "Her Porcelain Dream's"

    I'm not kidding..that was amazing!!

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  • Sweet Fragility
    18 years ago

    Done.

    Please comment and vote on:

    ~ Lament of a Dying Butterfly

    Thanks!

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  • luv Shelbz luv
    18 years ago

    I'm about to read it and
    do whatever poem ya want

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  • Miu
    18 years ago

    Done :) Could you do: Teddy bear.

    Thank you!

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