Poetry Contest!!! -Tore Down our Walls!

Hiya! Please read my new poem its probably one of my favorites and I would love comments on it.
Im also entering a poetry contest through my school so I would like to have a good idea on which poems I should send:) I will R/R/C on your poems as well just leave a list I love reading poems so I will read many!

Done.

Could you please do...

` Her Porcelain Dream's
` A Betraying Friend
and
` The Dawn OF Love.

Thank's.
-- Elly.

P.S I might check out more of your peices when I get the time.