Older poems

I would really like some feed-back on my older poems, as most of them don't have very many comments or votes.

This is how the deal will go:
1 for 2
2 for 3
3 for 5
4 for 7

-You MUST rate in order for this to count.

THANK YOU.

Come on, someone, please.

Fine i'm in i'll do 2 for 3
Ok
And i'll let you pick three random poems from me