Edited poem... :] (1 for 1)

I edited this poem i wrote a while ago... last year when i started writing...

it's called Promise

i would really appreciate if yall could comment on it now... i didnt change tht much... but just enough

please leave me a title on here... or if u dont care, i can choose some random poem... :]

thanks you guys!

Plz... ?!?!