Spoooooky Halloween contest (everyone enter)

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    17 years ago

    *RESULTS AT THE BOTTOM*

    1st place - favs and all their poetry (be patient)
    2nd place - 10 r/r/c and favs
    3rd place - 8 r/r/c
    4th and 5th - 7 r/r/c

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    Haha. I looked at this a few days ago and the last one wasn't up there. And, I've been trying to figure out which one to do, but I'm glad you put it up.

    Because, I love it!
    "Cauldrons bubble", pleasse.

  • JayJ
    17 years ago

    OH!!! SWEET!!! "monsters" please.

  • Poes Raven
    17 years ago

    Hmmm. Guess I'll take Monsters as well.

  • Poes Raven
    17 years ago

    "Monsters"

    The creepy and the crawly things that howl in the night, they hunt you down and freak you out and scare you to a fright. Dripping fangs and bright red horns or maybe bat-like wings, your palms begin to sweat as you imagine all these things. You sleep with one eye open and seek shelter with the light, But in your dreams the scary things take over you tonight. So check your bed and closet too before you say your prayers, for monsters are roaming everywhere and they're feeding on your fears.

  • Kyrodo
    17 years ago

    This one's for monsters. Sounds kinda cheesy/routine for a dragon xP lol (kudos to half-dragons and winged anthros/people! xD). Since it is halloween and all, I'm putting the dragon in a mean perspective >.<. Hope ya guys enjoy!

    Dragon

    A mighty champion of the skies
    Its scales shining like a thousand rubies
    It wields the claws of a mad beast
    Its vicious jaws covered in blood
    'Tis the bringer of flames and death
    An awesome power feared by all
    It answers to no one

    Up the night of a full moon
    The dragon swoops into the night
    Searching for blood and flesh
    A feast worthy of kings
    Screams enter the air upon its fearsome sight
    Fires arise
    Blades are drawn
    A rain of arrows cover the sky
    But they are no match for the dragon's might

    It's majestic beauty is revealed in the flames
    All turns to silence as it prepares its first attack
    An epic terror takes hold of all
    The hearts of Men are turned to ash
    In one fell swoop, many are slain
    Blood and flesh rips up into the air
    Dying cries are quickly put to rest
    The great beast shoots back up into the sky
    It's countless scales sparkle with crimson light

    'Twas merely its appetizer
    The dragon quickly returns
    Many have turned and feld, but there is no escape
    The remaining search for their resolve
    An angel whispers a quiet prayer
    As the beast once again begins to charge
    The land is brought into a one-sided battle of death
    The winged beast gains but a few scars
    The lives of dozens are lost forever

    When the creature has finished its feast
    Countless cries of agony fill the sky
    As raging flames rip across the plains
    The satiated dragon rapidly climbs back up into the heavens
    Leaving behind a charred and desolate land
    The remaining survivors know that this is merely the beginning of the end
    Of all they held dear

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    17 years ago

    Anyone else?

  • Poes Raven
    17 years ago

    I hope so. there is still time so I hope more people get involved.....You hear me people? START WRITING!

  • JayJ
    17 years ago

    Aww...I hope more Join!! It will be more fun if there is more compition. Beside this is my first contest!!! C'mon POEPLE!!!!

    *PEER PRESSURE* lol

  • Pete
    17 years ago

    Ok Ok !!

    I will reserve Spooky Spells, only in the interests of a fair fight ... you need losers like me to be able to find a winner.

    I can't guarantee it this week - but will 100% be before the deadline. 0o0o i just came up with a line already!

    You forced me into this JayJ. (- . -)

  • Mommy And Me
    17 years ago

    Pumpkin juice... no cauldrons bubble... NO!!! ummm ummm ummm ...pumpkin juice... no cauldrons bubble... ........pumpkin juice... no cauldrons bubble... .pumpkin juice... no cauldrons bubble... ....pumpkin juice... no cauldrons bubble... ........pumpkin juice... no cauldrons bubble... THIS IS HARD!

    oopss didn't choose! haha :) well anywhos...

    pumpkin Juice

    please :)

    -Terra

  • Devon
    17 years ago

    Some Kind of Monster

    by Devon

    As the merciful melodies of 12 clock ticks,
    The night screamed, silently...

    No footstep,
    No shadow,
    Not even a sound.

    Glaring though all the windows,
    As I stalk across the forsaken street.

    Rhythm of the darkness tempos me,
    As I dance to the deadly night.

    The moon smiles upon me,
    As I laugh back at the world, evilly.

    Children may cry,
    Parents may pray,
    As they hear my name.

    For over a dozen century I lived,
    No one has ever seen my face,
    Nor lived long enough to tell my existence.

    For eternity,
    The night, I hunt.
    For eternity,
    The curse, I carry.

    (I donno this one works for both halloween theme and monster)

  • Poes Raven
    17 years ago

    This was my first contest as well. I dont know how happy I am with what I wrote. I kinda winged it. I might sign up for another catagory and do another one in a diffrent style of writing.

  • Poes Raven
    17 years ago

    Sign me up for witchcraft since no one has touched that yet. I will post it later today

  • JayJ
    17 years ago

    Thanks Pete! YEEY!!

  • Poes Raven
    17 years ago

    "WitchCraft" *Dedicated to Tara*
    Bathed in the dusk of evening and dressed in black they come, woman of great power and faith. They enter the forest as night masks the sky with its ebony hue. The entire world is silent as they approach a clearing. The wind ceases and the stars appear as they make their way to a clearing. The moon shines her blessing down on them as they make a fire, the light from the flames dancing across their faces. They encircle the fire and join hands and in that moment the world stops moving.
    All is silent. Raising their heads they sing out in one voice. To whom they call no one knows but them. They close their eyes and lower their heads and the world starts once again. The wind slowly moves thru the trees as they sway back and forth in a rhythmic dance. Energy seems to pulse around them as they slowly put out the fire. Quietly and swiftly they leave the way they came. No trace is left of their gathering, only the sound of their voices echoing thru the trees like a whisper on the wind.

  • Poes Raven
    17 years ago

    Our bad bob, we're just passionate about our poetry. she just wanted to make sure everyone was envolved thats all.

  • Mommy And Me
    17 years ago

    Pumpkin Juice {Terra's Halloween Licentia Rhyme}

    Through the garden the weeds are taking over;
    The edges are covered within sweet clover.
    a deep green plant is growing on the sidelines,
    and along the dirt you can see the great vines.
    Entangled within you see a small orange ball--
    The frost seemed to have done nothing after all!
    The giant oak tree sits beside the garden
    her roots are seeping in, they are not hidden.
    Leaves of orange crimson over lays the plant
    Anything it wants the oak would surely grant.
    And within their thoughts there is a forever--
    and within their thoughts there is a forever.

    Then the oak trees protection begins to fall--
    Then the oak trees protection begins to fall
    Beginning to loose sight of the incoming frost
    She swore to protect it at all of her costs;
    Some voices are heard far down in the distance.
    Her undying will seemed to be subsistence;
    as they walked down below her crunching her leaves.
    They took with them the pumpkin, those little thieves.
    To tear open and carve to their masterpiece;
    her over lying pain never seems to cease.
    And within their thoughts there is a forever
    And within their thoughts there is a forever.

    And the pumpkin juice is tossed upon the wall--
    And the pumpkin juice is tossed upon the wall
    where the raven's black eyes gaze upon the feast
    from the darkest corners, comes another beast,
    And soon there is a court yard full of monsters;
    Surely they were fairytale characters --
    but no, look there, the pumpkin juice- it awakes!
    to take its revenge on the great oaks mistakes.
    The raven cawed, and the beasts began to chant;
    as the pumpkin juice became the assailant.
    And within their thoughts there is a forever
    and within their thoughts there is a forever.

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    The Licentia Rhyme Form, a poetic form created by Laura Lamarca, consists of at least 3 12-line stanzas with 11 syllables per line. Of course, the poem can be elongated adding on to the following rhyme scheme: aabbccddeeAA, BBffgghhiiAA, CCjjkkllmmAA

  • Poes Raven
    17 years ago

    Hmmm...we need more people in on this...where is everyone?

  • Romancing the Darker Side
    17 years ago

    Quick question- Does the poem have to be about Halloween, or just the title?

  • emilyy
    17 years ago

    Halloween please?

  • emilyy
    17 years ago

    ----halloween

    halloween night

    It was very scary and dark
    when we went to the 'haunted' park
    it was to be believed that one had died
    right beneath the slide
    me and my friends went there
    we got spooked by the sign warning to beware
    we still continued on our voyage
    i didn't believe the legend, i saw it as fake knowledge
    i noticed the full moon shining on us
    i thought, maybe it was the legend that i could trust
    then there was a loud scream
    the fear made me drop to my knees
    if it were any other night but that night
    i probably would've been alright
    but that night was Halloween
    and that always does something to me

  • Pete
    17 years ago

    Spooky Spells.

    Make your enemies crazy or drive them insane,
    Inject this next potion direct to a vein.
    Eye of a newt and a puppy dogs tail,
    Two spider eyes and the shell of a snail.
    Mixed all together with a boomslang skin.
    Take the juice of a leech and pour it all in.

    For the love of your life to fall at your toes,
    Follow this recipe and ingest through the nose!
    The root of a daisy and four lacewing flies.
    Armadillo bile with black beetle eyes.
    Three pinches of nettle and Lionfish spine.
    Stirred in a marinade of fresh nettle wine.

    To release all your evil, forgive all your sin.
    This next one is oral, just consume with a grin.
    Use a Doxy egg white, one pomegranate seed.
    A sliver of snake fang and half Gilly weed.
    Add 2 rats whiskers stirred with bicorn horn.
    Two sprigs of Knott grass but leave it un-torn.

    Now for my specialty, it's the ability to fly.
    This one's the doozy, must be poured in the eye.
    Take one crushed moonstone, three porcupine quills,
    Some murlap essence and two platypus bills.
    Salamander scales with a wolfsbane petal.
    Add one stem of fluxweed before it can settle.

    Now some may be cynical, irrationally so.
    If you won't try one out; how would you know?
    New ingredients arrive, and the potions revised.
    But take just one sip and you might be surprised.
    These potions all work if you just can believe.
    Yet they all must be taken on All Hallows Eve!

    ~Pete.

  • lil ashie
    17 years ago

    Hey i want to do monsters ill do a bit of
    dududududududud..dudududu.who u gonna call?,
    call ashleigh

  • Prophecies In Kodak
    17 years ago

    I'm posting for Teria. She's having computer problems..

    Cauldrons Bubble.

    "Mwahaha," evil laughs and evil screams
    heard through-out this winerish night.
    With aburn leaves spread about the ground
    and burdens of a lonely soul; hollow be the sound.

    Whispers of a haunted house rise above the sky.
    'Frighten me, frighten me,' all the little children cry.
    How awful are their words echoing the air.
    Breathing here in silence a witch too tempted now.
    The leaves wrestle one another upon the ground,
    and burdens arise in devlish, aggonizing screams.
    "Don't you run from me, I'll catch you little devils."
    with literal meaning they sit within bars, shaking in fear.
    and, the cauldron's bubble rises above each hells level.

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    Haha. It works now. (:
    But, thank you so much Ian.
    You're a greatttt friend.

  • Poes Raven
    17 years ago

    Getting closer to the deadline people! anyone else going to enter this?

  • emilyy
    17 years ago

    Someone plz join...i am the only 1 under halloween. plz join. <3

  • LadyWaszky
    17 years ago

    Im doing a poem for another contest called spiderwebs. can i enter that here too?

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    17 years ago

    Go for it :D

  • Poes Raven
    17 years ago

    Last day of the contest! True poets would enter this contest. right everyone? so get to writing people. hop too! chop chop!

  • JayJ
    17 years ago

    -My Monster-

    Out it came,
    It gave me a terrible fright.
    With those big, big eyes,
    It was quite the sight.

    It was green and lumpy,
    and looked like a monkey.
    It was kind of chunky,
    and getting' pretty funky.

    Out it came,
    it went KA-BAM!
    it slipped on some jam.

    "Hey man!"

    It looked afraid,
    but I grabbed it's hand.
    I was surprised to find
    his name was Dan.

    He is my monster.
    my fellow friend.
    we like to go boo people
    every now and then.

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    17 years ago

    Here are the results.....

    They all were spooooky and really cool.

    1st - Pete 10/10
    2nd - Kyrodo 10/10
    3rd - JayJ 9/10
    4th - XoX The Forbidden Smile oXo 9/10
    5th - emilyy 8.5/10

    Teria 8/10
    Devon 8/10

    Please pm me all you poems you want me to r/r/c

    Well done all xxx

  • Pete
    17 years ago

    Yippee!

    Thanks Alex,
    I'll pm you with titles. Congrats to all - some really good entries.

    [[Edit]] I don't need to pm you - I only just noticed. Oops.

    ~Pete.

  • Poes Raven
    17 years ago

    Congrats to all the winners. guess I'll try harder next time.

  • JayJ
    17 years ago

    Yay! I got third! better then not being placed at all!

  • Mommy And Me
    17 years ago

    Congrants everyone :-)