Over 18 offer only. First 5

  • Pete
    18 years ago

    I've attempted an "Explicit poem" and I'm looking for over 18's to rrc and .. yes criticise it.
    My poem is called "That Girl"

    I am willing to rrc 3 of your poems in return.
    If you don't leave titles I will pick at random.
    Open to the first 5 to reply.

    Be warned though, i leave honest comments.

    Thanks in advance.

    ~Pete.

  • Normal is the Watchword
    18 years ago

    Iris
    The Vampire Lurks
    I speak the night

    Thanks

  • Italian Stallion
    18 years ago

    Very nicely done.

    I know you've commented on a few of my poems before, and I'm not sure which one's you've read, so I'll let you pick what you want to read.

    Thanks in advance, Joe

  • Normal is the Watchword
    18 years ago

    THank you so much for your comments and for taking the time to read them. I hope you get helpful comments on your poem and will be sure to read more of yours.

  • Pete
    18 years ago

    Done yours too now Joe. Nice work ..
    p.s didn't think you had a soft side Joe .. Hmm wonders never cease. Very good stuff.

    RoadandtheRadio - don't mention it, the pleasure was all mine, i guarantee that!

  • Pete
    18 years ago

    Emma, yours are done now - if anyone else wishes to take me up on this offer, please feel free ... Its midnight here in England now so i will catch up on any tomorrow in work.
    (Don't tell my boss though)

    ~Pete.

  • Wallace
    18 years ago

    Yea sure I'll do it. Just do my favs in return, thanks a bunch.