Over 18 offer only. First 5

I've attempted an "Explicit poem" and I'm looking for over 18's to rrc and .. yes criticise it.
My poem is called "That Girl"

I am willing to rrc 3 of your poems in return.
If you don't leave titles I will pick at random.
Open to the first 5 to reply.

Be warned though, i leave honest comments.

Thanks in advance.

~Pete.

Iris
The Vampire Lurks
I speak the night

Thanks

Very nicely done.

I know you've commented on a few of my poems before, and I'm not sure which one's you've read, so I'll let you pick what you want to read.

Thanks in advance, Joe

THank you so much for your comments and for taking the time to read them. I hope you get helpful comments on your poem and will be sure to read more of yours.

Done yours too now Joe. Nice work ..
p.s didn't think you had a soft side Joe .. Hmm wonders never cease. Very good stuff.

RoadandtheRadio - don't mention it, the pleasure was all mine, i guarantee that!

Emma, yours are done now - if anyone else wishes to take me up on this offer, please feel free ... Its midnight here in England now so i will catch up on any tomorrow in work.
(Don't tell my boss though)

~Pete.

Yea sure I'll do it. Just do my favs in return, thanks a bunch.