PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Can you please read my short story.
its called a cup of sunshine. give me all feeback good/bad whatever.

I will do wahtever you ask me for :)

O.k, I'm on it, can you then r/r/c my two poems called:
1. Voo doo vacancy
2. Prophecies in Kodak

Thanks a lot!

Done... great story, very heartfelt.