Questions of a man

Hi peeps if anyone could r.r.c my new poem

..............questions of a man.........................

ill defo return the favour

plz,plz,plz

Thanx in advance

Gary.

Finished.
Could you please do..

`Lyrical Poison.

It's not my best but I want some feedback on it, so if you want you can do another peice, and I will return the favour.

Please vote, for I do in return.

thanks,
Elly.

Hi elly i r.r.c'd a couple of your pieces, nice work,
u have a nice yet unusual style, you write from the heart thats for sure.

Thanx emma. loved your work too