Hey guys! big favor!

Hello everyone!! huge favor to ask of all of you! Can you read my new poem "The Walls" and tell me what you think. Its super long but i hope it will be worth your time... It would mean so much to me!!!!!!!! and i will return the favor! thanks a bunch!!!!!! =0) If you r/r/c mine, i'll rate 3 of urs!!! please... !!! thanks!!!!!