Antithesis
18 years ago
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I haven't been writing much for quite a long time and I would like to sharpen my skills by doing a few requests from people. |
Jade
18 years ago
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Name: jade |
Antithesis
18 years ago
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Hello Jade. Thank you for the spontaneous reply. I've written it already since yours is the only request I had received so far. It does rhyme though. I'm not sure if you would be contented with that. Do have a look through it and be sure to comment and rate it. It's under Friendship Poems [Others], titled "To Jade". |
Antithesis
18 years ago
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No problem. I showed my Father and he degraded it. I thought you were going to find it abhorrent as my Father did. Glad that you liked it. |
Antithesis
18 years ago
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My Father is nowhere near to being a poet but he is very critical though. Not really. I don't have much passions. My life is as mundane as it can be. |
Antithesis
18 years ago
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In reply to Colleen, I am not exactly sure what you want the content to be about. You have to be specific. And when you refer to her as "Mom", is it your real Mother? Or is it just a close friend whom you merely look up to as a role model? Do let me know so that I can come up with a poem that really satisfies you instead of just passing the scratch. |
Antithesis
18 years ago
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Is there any specific incidents that is inscribed in your mind? I need details. Her name, age, how long you have known her for, how did you know her, how has she helped you before etc. |