Real Comments Please

I'm looking for some real comments on my work. Not just praise, actually tell me what you like / dislike.

If you could do any of my featured poems, I will return the favour two-fold.

Please don't just praise for the sake of praise .. if you dislike it tell me what and why.

Thanks in advance.

~Pete.

Ok pete I think 2 for four would be a good start please read and comment on these four pieces and have a good day Plot121

Ominous Fate
Grinder Of War
Two Brothers
Contrast Of Love
'Thanx again

Thanks Robert, your poems are done. Nice writing .. but some could do with a bit of attention.

Anyone else?

Amazing poems.
I'll check more out some time.

Would you do:
o1. Early Winter.
o2. Children Of The Wind.
o3. Hold On.
o4. Silent Cries Of The Purest Heart.

Hey, I will take a look at ur poems.