Real Comments Please

  • Pete
    18 years ago

    I'm looking for some real comments on my work. Not just praise, actually tell me what you like / dislike.

    If you could do any of my featured poems, I will return the favour two-fold.

    Please don't just praise for the sake of praise .. if you dislike it tell me what and why.

    Thanks in advance.

    ~Pete.

  • Robert
    18 years ago

    Ok pete I think 2 for four would be a good start please read and comment on these four pieces and have a good day Plot121

    Ominous Fate
    Grinder Of War
    Two Brothers
    Contrast Of Love
    'Thanx again

  • Pete
    18 years ago

    Thanks Robert, your poems are done. Nice writing .. but some could do with a bit of attention.

    Anyone else?

  • Teria
    18 years ago

    Amazing poems.
    I'll check more out some time.

    Would you do:
    o1. Early Winter.
    o2. Children Of The Wind.
    o3. Hold On.
    o4. Silent Cries Of The Purest Heart.

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    18 years ago

    Hey, I will take a look at ur poems.