Please read - Check Mate, You Win

I'm giving this another shot. My last poem, which was the first one in a long time, was not too deep. I think I tapped into what used to be there in me, when it comes to writing. I would love to hear any comments about my new poem.

Check Mate, You Win

Thanks in advance, I will happily return the favor
(and love to read poetry!!)

Hugs,
Tara

Excellent job

Can you please do Dancing on Clouds

Thankyou

Yes - any1 looking for more good reads ... the person who just posted here has some awesome ones!

Hope to hear from more of you guys :-)

((hugs))
Tara

Done. It was beautiful. Plx chk out any of my work!!

Thanks
Fsams

Done, you did an awesome job!

Could you check out any of mine? Thanks a ton!