Category for my new poem?

  • ¤©h€€®ƒüll¥♥©¥ñ!c@l¤
    19 years ago

    hey guys, I wrote a new poem, I just don't know what category it should go in. Its like part nature and part sad, but at the end its happy (if that makes sense) anyway, here is the poem:

    Leaving Trials and Tribulations(Crimson Cries)

    As it snows it reminds me of the crimson cries
    Falling to the ground like that of God’s winter tears
    Erasing all the lines of wrong paths taken
    And trying to delete all the suffering

    As I look out the sheer glass window into the backyard
    I think of how good my life used to be
    Now tears of sadness replace those of contentment
    And I have no one to turn to for my grief

    I just want to be blissful again
    I want to cry clear tears instead of scarlet
    I want to know what its like to frolic through meadows
    And play hide-and-seek in the abundant woods again

    So let this snow slide off my windowsill
    Therefore I can see rays of hope and happiness
    Shining to give me a cue to spread my wings
    And leave all these trials and tribulations behind

  • Mustardhart
    19 years ago

    I would rather, you post it in life poems, or sad poems. But iprefer the positive vibes it gives than the sad tone.