6 For 13! (First Ten people)

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    I'm No Angel
    Worth: 3 comments

    The Bitch Is Back
    Worth:2 comments

    Why Wont You Leave?
    Worth: 2 comments

    Ana, I Wont Let You Win
    Worth: 2 comments

    It's To Late For Words
    Worth: 2 comments

    Dream desires (Collab)
    Worth: 2 comments

    Comment on all six, you will recieve 13 comments in return.

    NO one liners. Or I wont reply to ANY of your work.

    Don't know what to say? Here's a hint. Tell me what you liked and disliked, what I am doing wrong and what I am doing right, what can be improved and why etc.

    I can handle criticism so be honest.

    Leave titles or links or I wont do them.

    Your comments WILL get returned, but please keep in mind I DO have a life. Give me time.

    Thank you, have a nice day.

    xxx

  • unknown
    17 years ago

    Done,,, Very nice.. ^^
    Would you please do any 3 of my featured? Thx.. ^^

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Thank you =)

    I'm running low on time today and have SO much to do while I'm on the computer, so I will get to your's tomorrow.

  • Spirit
    17 years ago

    I'm No Angel
    Why Wont You Leave?
    Ana, I Wont Let You Win
    It's To Late For Words
    Dream desires (Collab)

    i did those 5
    you only have to do nine

    -Dragon Spirit

    -Two Teachers

    -Hidden Story

    -Fire

    -The Last Day

    -STOP IT

    -Tell Me Why

    -The Seven Deadly Sins

    -Losing It

    Thank you come again

  • Pete
    17 years ago

    I've done Dream Desires - brill work, loved every syllable!

    Could you do..

    Seasonal ABC's [Tongue Twister]
    &&
    Sins Of Omission [Contest]

    Thanks in advance.

  • Nigel Oliver
    17 years ago

    Oh ok, i'll comment on and tell you what i think about thoes 6 poems of yours.

    You only have to comment on 6 of my poems

    -The Suffocated Heart

    -Death of Dreams

    -Deceit

    -This Tainted World

    -Our First Lustful Dance

    -Recreating Beauty

  • Nigel Oliver
    17 years ago

    Done, really great poems, i liked Dreams desires the best.

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    All done.

    Anyone else?