Lifes like a Carousel

This is my new poem!
I wrote this feeling pretty darn confused, and really annoyed at myself.

I'd like some honest comments, please dont be afraid to be cruel if needs be, if its crap, just say.

Love always, Tara-Kay
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Hiya Tara,
I've R/R/C on that poem. I hope my comment is ok. I've been looking for more experienced members to read my latest piece .. and you're just about as experienced as they come.
If you could R/R/C my latest .. Seasonal ABC's [Tongue Twister] I would be eternally grateful.

Fanks!

~Pete.