The start of a good poem

  • DeathsRose
    16 years ago

    Everyone add 2-3 lines to the poem and se how it turns out...I know there was a post like this a while ago, but I havn't seen any others so I figured 'd try to start another one

    She rushes into his arms
    With a longing to be close to him

  • NearlyCrazy6
    16 years ago

    He has been away for so long
    She thought he would be gone forever
    But her negativity has been proven wrong

  • NearlyCrazy6
    16 years ago

    She has learned to never say never

    ^^Sorry, i thought of it after i posted that one above

  • meandhim080307
    16 years ago

    But still she wonders
    and and always remembers
    will it be the same,
    or a new burning ember?

    idk

  • DeathsRose
    16 years ago

    Will he still care for her
    Or has he moved on
    Is she still the love of his life

  • DeathsRose
    16 years ago

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