Detailed 1 for 1. My newest piece.

I've now completed my newest piece, i think its my best dark/sad poem...

If you rate and leave a comment on it, i'll rate and leave a comment on one of yours.

Explaining what i thought of it in detail, and i'll put a lot of thought into your poem.

Tell me which one you want me to comment on.

I'll comment on one of your poems, making it at least 3-5 sentences of my own words.

Please be detailed and explain thoroughly of what you thought.

My newest poem is.

Lost in Eternal Sorrow.

Thanks in advance.

~Nigel~