Another piece 1 for 2

My newest piece is called

Taking My Breath Forever

Please leave your comment detailed, i'll do the same for you.

I'll leave 3-5 sentences of my owns words on what i think of your poems.

Thanks in advance.

~nigel~

I read it, and my thoughts are in the comments so there's no need for me to repeat them here.
If you could please check out my "Kasumi", that's all I need, and any constructive criticism is welcomed with an open mind.
Thank you, and keep up the great work!!!
=^^=

I really liked reading kasumi

I'm on right now so, if anyone else wants to comment on me so i can comment on them feel free :D

Hi its done

i want u to do my 2 newest poem thanks