Desperation and Angel Dust - [[2 for 3]]

If you can please comment my two newest poems, "Desperation" and "Angel Dust". I will then return the favour on three of your poems.

MUST LEAVE TITLES. :]

Done with those two, they're beautiful poem. Really love it.
Thanks for recommending...

Please do mine...

"Little Lady Love"
"A Girl With Beautiful Mask"
"Small Town"

Returned. :]

Next...

Done. Please do:

Remember (part 1)
Remember (part 2)
Remember (part 3; the last part)

Thanks.