Writing challenge

  • Gem
    16 years ago

    I'm going to give you a topic and you have to write about that topic for three minutes straight. Even if you end up writing, "I don't know what to write" for three mins, you write!
    Then after three mins, look back at your work and see what you can pull from it to make into a poem. It's a great cure for writers block.

    The first topic is fruit.

    Start writing!

  • stillmomsgirl
    16 years ago

    Banana
    lime
    grape
    ooh, a fruitcake=P

  • Gem
    16 years ago

    Lmao. Can't wait to see what you come up with Britt.

  • Teria
    16 years ago

    Lol.
    I type fast. :|

    This is what I got:

    A Never Ending Dream.

    Things never seem the same,
    the pain, it's pain that's never ending.
    and, it's like a dream, it's like it's so real.

    And, I look into the eyes of the devil.
    his wondrous joy is spreading onto me.
    With such sarcastic reasoning.

    And, I'm bleeding with such pain,
    that the blood is turning light blue.
    As if the sky were inside of me.

    And the burning sensations are but
    happiness grasping my soul;
    the wings of a butterfly.

    And, they're falling off of myself.
    teetering to the ground,
    burying themselves within,
    the soil that goes deep
    into layers of the earth.

    And if it's capturing moments,
    that shall return one day
    as happy times to look back on.

    But, in all reality it's but a dream.
    drifting to a place that no one knows.
    a dream that's evil, sinful, regretful.

    And there's not much we can do.
    about the world and all the selfish places,
    that are convinced all about this earth.

    For, it's such a disaster. . .
    to know the truth that's hidden
    from all eyes, all souls, all bodies.
    all hearts, that are burning.

  • Gem
    16 years ago

    Thats excellent! Finally someone who's given it a go! lol
    Well done =)

  • Teria
    16 years ago

    Lol, actually I loved it.
    I've done it many times since.
    It makes me feel better. (:
    haha.

  • Alex D
    16 years ago

    Not entirely sure what made me so insane as to write such a stupid poem and post it but nonetheless

    Silly Rabbit, Trix are for you and me:

    Strawberries
    You
    Me
    Sensuality

    Banana
    You
    Me
    Sexuality

    Cherry
    Trees
    You
    Me
    Memories

    Orange
    You
    Me
    Fashion
    Emergency

    Apples
    You
    Me
    Desirability

    Grapes
    You
    Me
    Iniebriety

    BlueBerries
    You
    Me
    Jubilee

    Eternity
    You
    Me
    Possibility

  • Gem
    16 years ago

    Lmao! Oh i love it! Thats such an unusual format!
    Brill attempt! Well done!

  • leena
    16 years ago

    Actually..i tried for 2 mins not three...i wondered what to write about fruits?!!!...so here what i got:

    fruits are health
    i like fruit
    apples and grapes are my favorite groups...

    well...i don't know what to write about fruit!!

  • ilovenicole
    16 years ago

    Ummmm...