~Backwards Poems~

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    16 years ago

    I've entered a couple of contests and I decided to make one for all of you. (edited out for self promotion, explain the format) I'm giving everyone of you a chance to make one.

    Rules:
    1-You can choose the title.
    2-It can be any type of poem.
    3-Has to have more than 8 lines.
    4-Has to have 2 meanings on it.

    ~If you need help on it, ask me, (edited out)

    Deadline for this poem is on December 5.

    PRIZES:
    1st- 25 comments & votes
    2nd- 20 comments & votes
    3rd- 15 comments & votes
    4th- 10 comments & votes
    5th- 5 comments & votes

  • Gem
    16 years ago

    Thats excellent, do we have to use the same title?

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    16 years ago

    No, you could choose the title.

  • Wallace
    16 years ago

    Count me in!

  • Beyond Repair
    16 years ago

    *This is old, I don't know if were allowed to do this but......*

    Forget

    by Beyond Repair

    Never forget my name, I want to burn it into you soul
    I want to read it in your veins, I want you to ache at the sight
    Of everything and anything cause it reminds you of me
    I want to burn me into your eyes so I'm all that you see

    I want every part of your brain to be soak in my memory
    I want your every thought to first begin with me
    I want every other word out of your god damn mouth
    Have something to do with me and not what your talking about

    Forget everything you ever knew
    Forget everything you once held true
    Forget everything that meant something to you
    And fill your every tissue every fiber with my being
    I want you to know what I am feeling

    This may be a shock to your senses
    But this is what I have to put up with
    This is a taste of what you put me through
    All the things you have no idea that you do

    I wish you knew half, of the spells that you cast
    Every shadow has your shape
    Every food has your taste
    You are my everything and there's no escape
    I just wish you could share the same fate

  • Finalgravedigger
    16 years ago

    Little angels talk alot

    In the heaves
    little angels talk alot
    drawing their weapons
    but have never even fought.

    They stay among the clouds
    in peace and wonder
    while hell is on earth
    with infinite blunders.

    Always speeching of bringing peace to earth
    being true angels
    they leave us wingless one the dirt.

    The devils strangle
    poor innocent souls
    as angels talk
    the earth is left in a hole.

    Slowly pulled away from salvation
    these little angles speak
    never truly lifting a finger
    leaving us very weak.

    Even though angels wont come
    its up to us to fight
    if they wont bring the light
    it is us who must make it right.

  • Wallace
    16 years ago

    The Little Boy by Wallace

    A poor lost soul, stranded on the streets
    Tired and exhausted with nothing to eat

    How did he get there no-one knows
    But of course this couldn't be the life he chose

    As the days went by not a word was spoken to him
    And the hungrier he got the more he grew thin

    Many weeks had passed and the streets turned cold
    The poor little boy had no where to go

    No family or friends or anyone to look after him
    So the weaker he got and the more he grew slim

    When he reached to the point he lost all hope
    So he ended his misery by hanging on a rope

    There his small fragile bones hung in the air
    And still to this day no one knew he was there

    All the pain and torture he kept within
    Now you tell me, what kind of world do we live in?

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    16 years ago

    So many already here.

    Keep them coming.

    So far so great.

  • ctmskm
    16 years ago

    Meanings:
    1. The context of hope in children and imagination.
    2. That noone is alone and somehow things get better in the long run.

    I Also know its a little late, but i do like this poem. and I figured at least I'd get it out there and see what others think of it.

    Thanks

    Angels In the sky.

    See into the night as the Angels fly,
    watch them float over you
    deep into the sky.
    With the children praying
    on the side of their beds,
    the angels are there
    to hold up there sleepy heads.
    And with every wish a child speaks,
    he hears the window as it creaks.
    As the child opens his eyes,
    hands still tight.
    He looks out the window
    and sees a most beautiful sight,
    he sees his angel,
    the one in his dreams.
    Oh how the cerulean sky
    Brings out her unblemished wings.
    He then speaks to her
    in a serene voice;
    "I guess dreams really do come true,
    to see someone as beautiful as you.
    And now I do believe in angels.
    I know at least theirs one."
    She then leans closer
    and kisses his cheek.
    He wants to say something
    but he can not speak.
    He just smiles
    as she goes back into the night,
    he watches her
    till she moves far, far, out of sight.
    He then looks up deep into the sky,
    and sees them all flying by.
    And in wonderment
    the little boy says;
    "I guess there really is
    such a thing as angels,
    Some just fail to open there eyes."

    These Angels in The Sky
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