2 poems (I shall rate all of yours too)

Hello, I have great enthusiasm for poetry and am inspired. I have long been reading it, but only recently decided to have my poke at it, mainly just haiku and tanka poems. Please rate my poems and share what you think and I shall also return the favor and vote for your poems aswell. Thank you very much.

34 views on one of my poems and 22 on the other; surely one of the many who viewed them would've had an opinion other than the two who voted.

Any honest opinions/C&C, please?

I only have four but you can take your pic