2 poems and ill rate/ comment back

My poems called "tell me you dont care" and the others "deaths silent song" so please rate/comment and ill returen the favor. i really want people opinions on it
you dont have to do both, but if you do ill return the favor.

Hey
I have commented on those poems for you. they were both amazingly written. Can you please comment my newest poems please.
Thanks in advance

Kalee

Im done for now.