Camila Contest....[Cindy]

  • Kenny
    17 years ago

    TITLE: You Got My Love
    BY: SarahDale

    I was imprisoned by a severe cold loneliness
    Accompanied by a tragic and lousy hand of fate
    Pulled down by prejudices and degrading failures
    All alone I stroll and played this unfair game of life

    I'm the greatest of all mistakes God has ever created
    But you showed me that I'm wrong and lifted up my soul
    You held my hand and together we journey life
    Taught me many things and I learned them so well

    Treated me like I'm above of them all, though I'm not
    Made me believe that I'm one of a kind and unique
    You built a bridge for me leading to success and happiness
    And made me feel I'm not all alone with you in this world

    Because of you, I gain self confidence and strength
    To face life's obstacles and narrow adversities
    Then I felt I'm on the top of the world and saw you down
    Your eyes tell me that you're truly happy of what I've become

    As you pour down your soul and heart to me, help me through
    Gave me what all you've got and you can do
    I climb down to you to thank for the greatest gift of all
    Without you in my life, I'm sure I will eventually fall

    You got my love honey since from the start
    And I don't want us to be separated apart

  • Kenny
    17 years ago

    TITLE: It's Enough
    BY: SarahDale

    Your sweet tender kisses
    Is enough to show your affection
    Your lovely gentle touches
    Is enough to show your passion

    Your tight warm embraces
    Is enough to show that you really want me
    Your cute angelic smiling face
    Is enough to make me happy

    The promises and dreams you shared
    Is enough to show that I'm a part of you
    To know that you're a scared
    When I leave, knowing you love me too

    As you go to church and pray for our love
    Is enough to show how our love means
    To tell me that I'm the greatest gift you have
    Is enough to show how precious I've been

    It's enough that you want to live with me
    Granting my wish of sailing with you the seas of eternity

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    17 years ago

    All right, it's updated. =D

    There's 10 spots left, so hurry and reserve your spots!

  • Patience
    17 years ago

    You Got My Love
    By: Patience

    I thought of you today
    Your presence lingered upon a poet's diary.
    Passionate and effective
    Words of love never expressed more beautifully
    As the essence of you stirred about
    Each line captivated my mind
    Emotions spark beyond control
    Pointing me towards a world I have yet to find
    Now halfway through this penciled paradise
    Words moving with ease as a river flow
    And with a single thought of you
    The poem became effective
    Even more-
    The words of a genius
    Graceful etched upon this page
    It is absolutely amazing how
    This poet knows exactly what to say
    Overwhelming my senses
    Indulging my soul
    with the sweetest caress
    I am now feeling so whole-
    Could I possible feel
    These few words of a poet?
    Purifying my heart
    Im in love- and I know it
    My heart began to race
    From each word of this diary
    I am down to the end
    Realizing-
    You are now apart of me.

  • Tammie
    17 years ago

    Can I please unreserve my spot? I'm having writer's block at the moment. I'll leave the spot free incase someone else wants it. If I can write, I'll re-enter.

    It was 'Losing you all over again'

    Sorry.

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    17 years ago

    Well, it's been updated. There's a couple days left for this contest, so if you want to join, go right ahead.

  • Patience
    17 years ago

    Everything Changed
    by Patience

    I arose this morning
    To rays of sun light
    Gleaming gently across my face
    As every morning
    I filled my cup with coffee
    Sweetened to perfection
    And unwrapped a biscotti
    Faded paths shadow the routes I have walk time and time before

    But something was off
    Something was different
    Something just was not right

    I greeted the noon
    With lips of crimson
    Smudges stained along the rim of a caramel frap
    A typical afternoon
    Or so I thought -
    I have took these roads before

    But something was off
    Something was different
    Something just was not right

    The night fell
    With frost
    And silence echoed the walls
    Consumed in darkness
    Bitterness blankets my bones
    For these chill are unforgiving
    Reminding me-
    I am alone

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    17 years ago

    Considering that's there's still a few more spots left, I'm going to leave this up until Feb. 14. Any more entrants?

  • Polaroid
    17 years ago

    Everythings changed please, i'll have it done as soon as i can, thanks

    yours truly
    polaroid

  • Polaroid
    17 years ago

    EVERYTHING HAS CHANGED

    The days roll by, guilt filled with lies
    The days roll on, like waves crashing the shore
    And The days will keep like this, filled with the lies
    Filled with everything you've done,
    Everything you've changed

    It used to be bliss, pure sweet happiness
    But now, after your lies, its ended,
    It has all changed, now all you do is snicker
    All you do is lie, and all the love I had for you
    still, will never die.

    And even when you laugh at me,
    when you make me want to cry
    I will always remember you, I will always be yours
    And though you're gone, and though you're taken
    I will still stay loyal

    And even now with all you've done to me
    I'm willing to forgive, I'm willing to forget
    I'm willing to move on
    Even though everything
    Everything has changed

  • Polaroid
    17 years ago

    Without your love please :P

  • Polaroid
    17 years ago

    WITHOUT YOUR LOVE

    The rain pelts down, collecting in puddles on the ground.
    I'm running along a path, after him, after him
    He's just ahead now, just beyond the next round.
    The mud splashes up my legs, making barely a sound

    I see him now, and he turns to look at me, as I come
    The rain's plastering his black hair to his face
    He smiles for a moment, then continues to run
    Quickening the pace, I keep up, some

    We'll tire soon, but not quite yet, we'll still race
    I'm closing in on him, and he turns, surprised
    He's caught unawares in my warm embrace
    He takes my hands, in a giddy waltz, face to face

    We spin, jig, prance and skip, beneath the setting sun
    Finally we tumble to the dew swept grass.
    As our breathing slows, we watch the moon rise, a day done
    And the rain slows to a pitter patter pun

    Puddles crowd around us, mirroring the moon
    The magic of love surrounds us,
    And I notice for once, his lips they're deep maroon
    And as I lean forward I understand everything

    Magic isn't imaginary, it takes many forms
    Its everywhere around us, and within us
    And as we kiss, I find nothing more to mourn
    My life is now full, complete with you by my side

    And without your love, which you so sweetly gave
    I'd be lost once again amidst the low lying mist
    You've always been there, keeping me safe
    But promise me this; never ignore me, without
    even a wave.

    And as the moon reaches its post, high in the sky
    From where it watches over, from where it guards
    We watch it smile, and mimic it say good-bye
    To the most glorious day, the most glorious time.

    POLAROID

  • Polaroid
    17 years ago

    So when is this contest going to close?
    polaroid

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    17 years ago

    ******CLOSED******

    Since not all entries were completed, there will only be a 1st & 2nd place.

    I will get to judging it and will have the results in a couple of days.

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    17 years ago

    *****RESULTS*****

    ~Hug Me~
    1- SarahDale
    2- ReproducedByIntelligence

    ~You Got My Love~
    1- SarahDale
    2- Patience

    ~It's Enough~
    1- Samantha Lynn
    2- My Mistakes

    ~Everything Changed~
    1- Polaroid
    2- Patience

    ~I Want~
    1- AblissfulDREAMER
    2- Luanne

    ~Everything's The Same~
    1- loveNpain

    ~It Goes For You~
    1- FavoriteForgottonStory
    2- RachelxxBlink

    ~Without Your Love~
    1- DeathsRose
    2- xPinkDizzyTeacupx

    ~Losing You All Over Again~
    1- xPinkDizzyTeacupx

  • Polaroid
    17 years ago

    Thanks alot, and great job everyone!