6 for 15!

Can You Take Your Smile Elsewhere?
Worth: 3 comments

Choke On Your Last Dying Word
Worth: 3 comments

Liar Liar (Licentia Rhyme)
Worth: 3 comments

Good To Be Gone
Worth: 2 comments

Just Let It Go
Worth: 2 comments

Does Love Really Hurt?
Worth: 2 comments

If you comment these six poems, you will recieve fifteen comments in return.

LEAVE ME A ONE LINER, AND I WILL DISMISS ALL YOUR WORK!

Don't know what to say? Here's a hint. Tell me what you like and dislike, what I'm doing wrong and what I'm doing right. How I can improve, etc.

It's called constructive critcism..I can handle it, so be HONEST.

Your comments WILL be returned, but remember I DO have a job, and a life, so please give me time.

Leave titles or links or I WILL NOT DO THEM!

Oh, and yes I'm aware I have another thread open still. I will be getting to both threads over the next few days. I'm not ignoring it, if anybody thinks I am.

Thank you.

Have a nice day.
xx

Deal..i dont have 16 poems but i'll glady make the deal anyway *i have like 6-7*

Thanks dear, i will be getting to your's within the next few days.

Gah. double post