Compromised Soldier

Hey everyone, if you dont mind, please take the time to r/r/c on my latest poem. i just posted it like 2 days ago, and there was a lot of emotion behind it, whether it shows or not. if theres something i should work on please let me know. thanks
Kimberly *<3*

I just left a very detailed comment about your poem. Hope it helps and I put much effort into it. :)

I have a range of poetry you could take a look at, comment back on any of them in return if you like :)