A Jousting Tradegy

I just finished "A jousting Tragedy" another try at a poem that had nothing to do with my personal feelings in a relationship. YA ;) Enough of that mushy stuff. PLEASE PLEASE read it and tell me what you think. I'll comment back on everyone that rates and comments. Please and thank you for your time :)

Done.
Can you please do.
` A cloud of tortured dreams.

PLease vote too.

thanks,
--Elly.

Just did. ;) thanks for yours :)