Nyell's New Contest *Titled*

  • NyellMoonlight
    16 years ago

    RESULTS IN THE BOTTOM!

    01. Three poets per title
    02. Three titles per poet
    03. No form/ rhyming scheme needed
    04. If you write formed poem, explain the form
    05. Deadline: 19th January
    PM me if you have questions!

    Prises:

    1st place: 10 r/r/c-s
    2nd place: 8r/r/c-s
    3rd place: 5 r/r/c-s
    4th place: 3 r/r/c-s
    HM: 1 r/r/c

    All entries will be commented!

    TITLES:

    Cosmic Pollution
    - I R Jordannn [DONE]
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    Spirals of fastened heartbeats
    - Decay In The Dark
    - Britt [done]
    - Jarred [DONE]

    Chocolate Memories
    - Rex Hunter [DONE]
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    World's Mechanism
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    Raven's Song
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    Gossips and Frustrations
    - Britt
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    Angelic Disaster
    - mOnStRiToS pRiNcEsS
    - xPinkDizzyTeacupx
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    Hues of Heart's Anatomy
    - Decay In The Dark
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    -

    Forced Impressions
    - Beautiful Chaos [DONE]
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    Hesitation between miracles
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    Broken Silence
    - mOnStRiToS pRiNcEsS
    - xPinkDizzyTeacupx
    - Tinged Melody [DONE]

    Scarlet Fogs
    - ReproducedByIntelligence [DONE]
    - Tinged Melody [DONE]
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    Fragrant brilliance
    - Tinged Melody [DONE]
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    Epilogue for Fallen Sky
    - DarkSpirit [DONE]
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    Laced Gloves and Crystallized Illusions
    - DarkSpirit [DONE]
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    Minefield called "Life"
    - SarahDale [DONE]
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    I'll whisper my secrets under crimson moon
    - Jarred [DONE]
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    Creativity that leads to Catastrophe
    - Decay In The Dark
    - Britt [DONE]
    - SarahDale [DONE]

    Take my hand
    - DarkSpirit
    - Rex Hunter [DONE]
    - Gem

    Bury me inside your screams
    - Rex Hunter [DONE]
    - ReproducedByIntelligence [DONE]
    - xPinkDizzyTeacupx

    Traces of Hostility
    - Phirion [DONE]
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    Murmuring Obsessions
    - ReproducedByIntelligence
    - Phirion [DONE]
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    Have Fun :)

  • Nix
    16 years ago

    Epilogue for Fallen Sky
    Laced Gloves and Crystallized Illusions
    Take my hand

    Great titles. Thanks :]

  • mier
    16 years ago

    Spirals of fastened heartbeats
    Hues of Heart's Anatomy
    Creativity that leads to Catastrophe

    Thanx. ^ ^

  • Teria
    16 years ago

    Murmuring Obsessions
    Bury me Inside Your Screams.
    Scarlet Fogs.

    :]

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    16 years ago

    I wanna reserve:
    "Angelic Disaster"
    &
    "Broken Silence"

    Please.

    Thanks!

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    Bury me inside your screams, angelic disaster && broken silence please.

  • Beautiful Chaos
    16 years ago

    Forced Impressions please

  • Teria
    16 years ago

    Here's two :

    Bury Me Inside Your Screams.

    Take my hand and play with me
    the lyrics dancing about the radio.
    Sing me lullabies of summer nights,
    filled with love and cherished memories.
    Fight back tears when you have to go-
    then bury me inside your screams.
    That tell the story of your dreadful life.

    See those music notes on the chorus line?
    Etch them within your skin, darling.
    They tell all the words I never said,
    and all answers that I didn't know.
    Then bury me inside your screams
    and when you have to go fight back tears
    that tell the story of your dreadful life.

    Now, tell me something baby.
    Can you hold me tight enough
    to make my insides twirl again,
    Just one last time to our lyrics?
    I love how they dance to the music,
    and move to your heartbeat
    that lies right on top of mine.

    And, I promise you aftewards
    You can fight back the tears
    when you have to leave me.
    And, bury me inside your screams
    that tell about your dreadful life -
    Just as long as you dance with me
    to the lyrics playing on the radio.

    Scarlet Fogs.

    Chain yourself to the tractor outside,
    and fill yourself with tears you've cried.
    Burn holes within those worn out jeans,
    and make sure you have your helping -
    of pepsi's addictive caffiene.

    Share your last word with loved ones,
    and remember the chain weighs a ton.
    So, strengthen yourself before you die
    in order not to give up on the first try;
    for, death's out to get you in a lie.

    "Perfection in a flawless manner",
    written across your cars banner.
    Let's spray paint what it said,
    along with "sucker" on your head,
    then open your eyes to the dead -

    It's more than words could say,
    the feelings put so perfectly -
    written about your driver seat,
    in writing that's oh so neat -
    " Scarlet Fogs Never Defeats"

  • Finalgravedigger
    16 years ago

    Can i have

    Hesitation between miracles

    and Minefield called "Life"

    Forced impressions

  • Gem
    16 years ago

    Take my hand please

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    I'll reserve Minefield called "Life" and "Creativity that Leads to Catastrophe" please

  • Beautiful Chaos
    16 years ago

    Forced Impressions

    You only see,
    What I allow,
    First impressions,
    Disavow.

    The mask is worn,
    For quite some time,
    A hill of trust,
    One must climb.

    Acquaintance,
    Friend's a title earned,
    You learn to shy,
    When you've been burned.

    Eyes may see,
    But they don't hear,
    The subtle tests,
    Laid out in fear.

    Proven,
    Your intentions true,
    Impressions left,
    And now subdue.

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    TITLE: Minefield Called "LIFE"
    BY: SarahDale

    Stuck in a minefield of limitless treasures
    Bountiful delights can be smoothly collected
    Sparkling diverse ornaments of pleasures
    Concealed on random walls and floors, protected

    Be vigilant and proceed with extreme caution
    Hollow cracked grounds can be softly activated
    By a single careless mistake and wrong direction
    There might be betrayers, select whom to be trusted

    ROUGH draft ROADS are abundant along the way
    Learn to sweat and PAVE IT with perseverance
    THE site is immense and complex for YOU to stray
    Don't get lost; tiny instincts must be given clearance

    Adversities may appear clueless with zero warning
    So fasten YOURSELF and guarantee each moment prepared
    For it may be intense that would cause you a suffering
    Still, pursue with endurance and don't get easily scared

    Fill the wheel borrow by your accumulated ores
    Along the path lies tragedy and sudden misfortune
    So engage with reflection, strength SHOULD be stored
    Power of will is vital, TO stay awake on your vision

    SUCCESS waits to those who never easily give up
    Within the minefield, opportunities ARE abundant
    In life, failures for those who will quit and stop
    Exuberant adversities hidden, faith should be constant

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    If you noticed, some words are CAPITALIZED, they are done for a purpose, , if you put them together. . . you'll come up with a saying that says:

    "THE ROADS TO SUCCESS ARE ROUGH, YOU SHOULD PAVE IT YOURSELF"

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    TITLE:Creativity that Leads to Catastrophe
    BY: SarahDale

    Oh My Lord!
    Mankind has grown to its full potential
    Breakthroughs that brought cosmic advances
    Marvelous discoveries for life's essential
    Never satisfied, even tiny creatures to enhance

    Colossal infrastructures. . .
    Sky high wonders. . .
    Genetic clones. . .
    Nuclear fission. . .

    Oh Heavenly Father!
    They become too powerful and frightening
    As their imaginations brought a tremendous reality
    A massive world of their own, so threatening
    Cheating Life and Death, as their creativity. . .
    Will lead them to a catastrophe. . .

    Your valuable teachings. . .
    Life's virtues and morality. . .
    Customs and beliefs. . .
    Diverse religions. . .
    They disregard and discard

    Oh almighty God!
    Day by day they've become more powerful as you
    Stretching their capacity to dominate everywhere
    Leaving you behind and there's nothing I can do
    Had also forgotten even your single bible prayer

    Devastation of Nature. . .
    Scattered hazardous pollutants. . .
    Biological warfare. . .
    Erasing thousands of lives. . .
    Bringing terror and death. . .

    Science and technology had created different inventions
    Even designed a tool of destruction to pulverized anything
    Biological and nuclear war fares spreading within nations
    Just to obtain superiority and power that cause. . .
    unstoppable killings

    Greed for wealth. . .
    Thirst for delights. . .
    Lack of righteousness. . .
    Screaming for justice. . .
    Deficient in Love. . .
    Living in chronic strife. . .
    Inequality and discrimination. . .
    Lost in Peace. . .

    My Lord!
    I'm sorry for what your living creations had become
    I hope am not alone in this horrifying world I'm living
    Hope they would be enlightened where they came from
    And realize their mistakes and consider you the only. . .
    Supreme Being

    Will wake up and see. . .
    That their creative minds had lead. . .
    To self-destruction and catastrophe

  • Nix
    16 years ago

    Epilogue for Fallen Sky
    by DarkSpirit

    The world is overcast by moans of fallen stars
    mixed with murmurs of shooting-angels,
    like the silence was a messenger of death,
    arched over reality, absorbing and shattering it.

    Epilogue for fallen sky is testament;
    bloody expanses of unknown whisper
    about swallowing silver that ravaged air.
    Intellect wandered, trapped inside chamber of foes.

    And the sky fell,
    fell, slaving to her twisted will;
    now just amorphous words testify of what used to be,
    earlier, before quickened metamorphosis that led to silver.

    One tear spilled for fallen sky,
    now silver bubble is foundation of tomorrows,
    and forever, silver oaths will be silver summon
    to silver deities that will silver over smitten silhouettes.

    ...and epilogue for fallen sky became silver.

  • Nix
    16 years ago

    Laced Gloves and Crystallized Illusions

    by DarkSpirit

    Dress yourself into crystallized illusions
    over the scalds on young hands
    and then deceive my hazy mind
    with your enchanting song of laced gloves.

    It's over, done- heart's impoverished,
    amorphous thieves whisper from the inside
    oh, yes, I was the one who gave them the key.
    Key to...
    I can't recall expression in thoughts...

    And you touch me over the scars
    with your damned hallucinations,
    repelling glassy faith into the leftovers of existence,
    and I already tasted broken glass,
    inside, plunging into...
    I can't recall expression in thoughts...

    Amnesia represents blessing that I searched for
    ...and all chaotic notions were uttered.
    With your laced gloves you built
    bullet of condolence, willfully.

    I have a gun, why don't you give me that bullet?
    Render the last cog to me
    for the mechanism of demented, god-like realizations.

    Memory whispers "soul",
    but the brain don't recognize the meaning;
    I searched through the dictionaries,
    but it seem that nobody knows,
    or they just can not remember, too.

    I can't be what you want me to be,
    so I'll satisfy myself with self-pity
    before the final battle,
    between laced gloves and crystallized illusions.

  • Nix
    16 years ago

    -- Take My Hand--

    Take my hand,
    the one soaked in flames
    whose palm's absorbing portal
    where winged lions and headless wizards peer.

    Then we can walk down the silver shores
    again, dancing around the point,
    towards those seas that flow from your eyes.
    I could relieve those written moments
    always, again- finding chaos inside of every breath.

    No, I can't recall all colors and names
    that rotated through darkened dimensions,
    but that's irrelevant before the fragility of our figures
    while the lines of cosmos rupture with demonic obduracy
    announcing entwining of nothingness and the greatest efforts.

    I'll repeat to silent colossuses
    (who flout somewhere, invisible to the eye)
    that I understand construction of red canals,
    so, take my hand,
    not with your palm that holds the window
    to awakened stars and prudent dragons
    take it with your soul,
    where the fire- I suppose- begun.

    Take my hand
    -- while the obscurity swallows worlds--
    take my hand
    -- show all asleep illusions--
    take my hand
    -- while bloody eyes represent sanctuary--
    take my hand
    -- bewitch white walls--
    take my hand...

  • mier
    16 years ago

    Hues of Heart's Anatomy

    Shades of gray revealing ardent grief and refusal to beat.
    Sombre remains of scars and stitches left for me to read.
    Complacent ego seeks refuge in the icy veins of elegy,
    weaving illusive colors that fades in slumbered eulogy.

    Fatigue smiles slowly wallow in self-induced emotion,
    complimenting the color of death in inevitable abberation.
    Feel the tint of envy drained in suffocated breaths,
    racing against static heartbeats that invoked frustrated wraths.

    Venom of blatant hatred burns in heartless eyes,
    masking any sympathy or truth that reside within lies.
    The bared tinge in igniting the paleness of my rage,
    will obscure the sephia message of a colorfast page.

    This epic trails of a tragedy in plethora of deception,
    seeking refuge in salutationof a mind chained to submission.
    There is something in the way your forlorn eyes remain speaking to me,
    slipping discreet signs within the decadent in hues of heart's anatomy.

  • mier
    16 years ago

    Creativity leads to catastrophe

    Take this paintbrush, paint serpentine swirls of tragic monody.
    Skipping stones of the imagination in our oddity.
    Belated smiles twitched savagely with twisted impatience,
    to commence the dreaded perfidy in stilted remissions.

    The art of the breath in your mind driven to create,
    this painting of mutilated fear which we illuminate.
    Words that we blatantly waste upon each other's ego,
    spelt the tone of defeat without a reason to follow.

    A mind of a thausand souls trapped in a delirium,
    writhing and begging to be released from a static odium.
    Unlock this eyes that seeks refuge in cowardice,
    to amend the wisdom of sanity in solitary lies.

    Indulge in this self-induced moment of abberation,
    stealing frozen glimpse of winter-stained demolition.
    Wander and deplore into self-contained injury,
    these fantasy whined for their presence to be an enemy.

    A pen that writes of a world seen by abstract eyes,
    replaced by a mind that follows in the breath of colored lies.
    Minority thoughts estranged from a change of memory,
    so nothing can amend this when creativity leads to catastrophe.

  • NyellMoonlight
    16 years ago

    It was really difficult to judge this, so many amazing poems were entered...

    1st place: 10 r/r/c-s- Decay In The Dark- Creativity leads to catastrophe

    2nd place: 8r/r/c-s- DarkSpirit- Laced Gloves and Crystallized Illusions

    3rd place: 5 r/r/c-s- Britt- Spirals Of Fastened Heartbeats

    4th place: 3 r/r/c-s- Rex Hunter- Bury Me Within Your Screams

    HM: 1 r/r/c- I R Jordannn- Cosmic Pollution

    Thanks everybody for participating! :)

  • Nix
    16 years ago

    Wow, great, thanks!
    I am so happy, this was exciting contest and these titles gave me a lot inspirations :]
    Congrats to all!

  • mier
    16 years ago

    Oh, gosh! thanx nix for telling me about this. ^ ^

    and thanx for the placing nyell. ^ ^ congrats to all the winners too!