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Name : SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
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SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
17 years ago

I have 2 new poems. Please r/r/c them and I will double it for each poem. No one/ two liners. Tell mewhat you like or dislike, what's wrong with it, etc. The poems are:

"Better Now"
&
"Angel"

Please leave titles.

Thanks!
MERRY X-MAS!!!

- Name : SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
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SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
17 years ago

Mm, not it's cool, but I'll comment the ones you asked me to comment.

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SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
17 years ago

Silent Screams and Alexis is done.

Anyone else?

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Christina
17 years ago

Ok read them both plz read ne of mine!!! idrc!!! thx

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SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
17 years ago

I love you silly is done.

Anyone else?

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SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
17 years ago

Anyone else?

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