Christmas Promise

Hey guys,
I just wrote this new poem.
It has a lot of meaning to me, and I would really appreciate some comments and ratings. I will do the same for you.
Its not a perfect poem... probably not my best but definitely has the most meaning. So if you have any tips on how to make it better tell me please
Jade

Hey guys! Thank you for the people who have commented on my poem!
- Today I changed it quite abit so its not exactly the same as before, same idea but more to it and more discriptive, if you still have any idea I would love the advice

I thought your poem was very good nice work