Writing Challenge #2

  • Gem
    16 years ago

    Since the last one was quite successful, i'm hoping to make this a weekly thing and whoever writes the best one gets three comments

    I'm going to give you a topic and you have to write about that topic for three minutes straight. Even if you end up writing, "I don't know what to write" for three mins, you write!
    Then after three mins, look back at your work and see what you can pull from it to make into a poem. It's a great cure for writers block.

    The second topic is stars.

    Start writing!

  • Adelle
    16 years ago

    I have to give this ago I haven't been wrighting much lately this might get me going again.

  • Adelle
    16 years ago

    Those bright twinkling stars
    So many miles away
    Those millions of dots
    Lighting up the night sky

    Looking out your window
    At a star so far away
    Wishing for that special person
    The one you met today

    Thay represent something special
    The bright light in your life
    The beauty of the universe
    And the beauty of a single life

  • Lisa
    16 years ago

    I glance with awe into the night sky and reach for the stars with all my might,

    As I aim for the brightest one, I come across a peculiar one.

    Was rusty and was not the brightest but had a glow no other attained.

    I gazed with amazement at how such a faulty star still glow with an uncompromising warmth to your heart.

    That star pierced my eyes with such a force that I seemed to be in a trance by its exquisiteness.

    That star and I grew to be friends; we intertwined into a being of mortality and indescribable divinity.

    I would hold my breath to grasp this dream for just a minute longer,
    and when I would open my eyes,
    I would see you with those pure eyes and I knew that we would be safe.

  • Tammie
    16 years ago

    I'm never in this forum.. but wow this is an awesome idea. I'm going to try it. :]

    Okay here I go...

    So I pulled you in close and whispered in your ear
    'If I could, I'd give you all of those in a second'
    You just looked at me with a strange look on your face
    As though I was crazy, but I just knew it was love

    From the first moment I saw you I knew you were special
    Never knowing how far I would fall and some would say
    That it was from right up there amongst those stars
    That I wish for you on, every single night they shine

    Burning bright, they glow for the hope I have in you
    One day, I know that I will share this feeling with someone
    Who will feel the same back, and we will be happy, but for now
    I am content with knowing it will happen... one day.

  • Gem
    16 years ago

    This is an excellent turnout everyone!
    Well done.

  • Ashleigh Skye
    16 years ago

    ??? shouldnt this go under the contest board?

  • Meet Me On Thames Street
    16 years ago

    This sounds realy cool and it's a really good idea, but I think I missed it for this week. Crap! lol. is it still open or is it over? and if it is over is there going to be another one?

  • Tammie
    16 years ago

    It's not over that I know of.. Idk. I think Gem will post when it is, and post another one. She seems to be the one holding these, this is my first one. :]

    I loveeee the idea though! =D

  • andrea
    16 years ago

    I have been waiting for you
    Since you went away
    I have been waiting for you
    But you seem so far away

    I think life is difficult
    And it’s even more without you
    I think I’ll suffer a lot
    And I’ll suffer for you

    Sitting on my stairs
    Messing up my hair
    Thinking about the past
    And asking me the question
    Do I dare?

    Do I dare to look through your eyes,
    And just try to smile?
    Do I dare to give you a hug,
    Trying not to cry?

    I’ve been thinking about you,
    But you’re not here
    I’ll miss you forever
    And I swear I’ll will.

  • Gem
    16 years ago

    Yep, this is to try and cure writers block, not a real contest.
    It ends tomorrow i think this one and then we'll get a new subject up =)

  • Pete
    16 years ago

    As we gaze at the heavens
    our little slice of the sky
    pearls shining back at us
    a truth we can't deny

    Angelic twinkling diamonds
    fill this beautiful view
    lived so many lifetimes
    still so clear and so new

    Nights crystal studded blanket
    that lays over this world
    glance at a new section
    a new landscape unfurls

    The stars are a lifeline
    for the brave and the bold
    take a look for yourself
    at the beauty they hold

    These gems of the sky
    shining brightly at night
    these heavenly teardrops
    bring us so much delight

    LOL - Nice task Gem. It's a pity when I try it a bunch of tripe comes out.

  • Lucy
    16 years ago

    Wheres yours gem? or do you not write?

  • Gem
    16 years ago

    Lmao. Oh i write all right. But i don't have writers block and i have too many poems about stars as you can see on my page, lol.
    Ok, this is closed now. I'll try sort through them over the weekend.

  • Tammie
    16 years ago

    Hey, what happened to this?

    I was looking forward to the next one, lol.

  • kevin Boundy AKA the ghost
    16 years ago

    I don't know if using it related to love is allowed but this is what i came up with:

    I cant sleep at night
    i just keep staring at the north star
    its like Ive been searching for you day and night
    and thousands of miles away their you are

    in fact you are my north star
    you guide me through the night
    without you in the sky
    it just doesn't seem right

    your the one person in my life thats constant
    you are always there
    and when i cant sleep at night
    all i do is look at you and stare

    your the brightest star in the sky
    your the guide that keeps me on track
    and every time i look up at the stars
    i can see you smiling back

    (love is all im good at) lol