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  • Men
    17 years ago

    1 for 1

    Please give me thoughtful comments and honest ratings.

    As in if you feel that something sounds choppy or wierd please point it out, or that if you like a certain part of the poem please tell me and explain why.

    This might sound a little much but it will give me ideas on what I need to improve on.

    Thankyou

  • Kaila
    17 years ago

    Will do
    plz do engulfed insanity
    thx much

  • Men
    17 years ago

    Thank You Kaila for the Comment

    I am done with yours

    Best Regards

  • Men
    17 years ago

    Anyone else?

  • FridusBlueheaven
    17 years ago

    Done with Survive, Once Upon A Time, The Angel, Loveless and Questions...
    All are excellent poems

    Please do mine:

    Angel Of My Night
    Bucket Of Flowers
    It's You
    Give Me Tonight
    Butterfly

    Thanks before!!!

  • Men
    17 years ago

    Done

  • Men
    17 years ago

    FridusBlueheaven you are an amazing poet. I am now done with your poems, and I think that they are one of the best I have heard so far.

    You are now a favorited Poet.

    Best Regards

    ^Men^

  • Men
    17 years ago

    Anyone else?

  • FlawlesslyTarnished
    17 years ago

    Done. :]

    My Fairytale please.

  • Men
    17 years ago

    Done wilted and I will say that was a wonderful poem.

    I suggest it to anyone that wishes to read a great work of literature.

    Best Regards

    ^Men^

  • Men
    17 years ago

    Anyone else?

  • Men
    17 years ago

    Hello...Anyone?