First ever collab that really needs commenting

I have a new poem up. It is the first time i have done a collab and i would love to know what you think. i will return the favor.
thanks in advance
Kalee

PLEASE i really need comments

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You really want a comment?
So I commented on it, have a great day!
And you don't have to return favor, as you wish.
Nice job for the first collab:]

Thanks for your comment and telling me what you really thought of it.
Thanks again
Kalee