Daddy, Believe [please ready ;/]

Hey guys.. I wrote a new poem; well it's actually my thoughts.
i'm thinking about giving it to my dad for inspiration.. it would help if i knew your guys' thoughts.

please... let me know...

[if you do leave titles.. this time, i can't PROMISE you that i'll get to it. sorry it's hard.. goig to the hopstial &st uff to see my dad & i haven't slept and stuff. so i'm sorry =[ ]

.... and that's supposed to be read* not ready slkjflksd. sorry ;/ a bit upset atm.

Sure, I'll read it... can you read my poem 'Beautiful Sunday' if you get the chance. I would really appreciate it. :)

Anyone else?