BROKEN TOY

  • A l y s s a
    17 years ago

    Hey I have a new poem called 'Broken Toy'. It's not finished yet but I really need some feedback.

    Please comment it :)

    Send me a msg and I'll comment yours if you like

    Thanks heaps :)

  • x0XBloodyFantasyX0x
    17 years ago

    I commented last night.