New poem. 1 for 2

Hey i have a new poem
"Dear Sarah"

if you could r/r/c on it id love to know your thoughts.
i will do 2 poems of your choice in return

thanks!

Hey good job! Very good poem

"Every Time"
"Lost Life"

Thanks in advance =}

I will do it. If you could please do any of my most recent. Please and thank you.