2 for 1: help me with my songwriting technique!

If you comment on my song "Enough" I will r/r/c thoroughly two poems of your choice!

Please give me constructive criticism and feedback, not just mindless praise or bashing. Thank you!

Also, if you have any suggestions for a title, please let me know!

Please and thank you!

Just commented yours. You can choose any 2 of mine you'd like.

Thanks you guys! I'm going to comment on your poems right now! :D