Michael
This, my friend, is a stroke of genius, from the layout, to the rhyme and the (may I say) quite horrid but wonderful imagery throughout. This is one of the most original pieces I have read on this site and will get my nomination when my votes are recharged later. If this isn't on the front page come next Monday, then the site must have been inundated with brilliance!
All the very best Michael,
Ben.
ps this is a poem that goes straight in my favourites and one I will return to again and again. Truly, well done.

That video! Lolol!!

I understand this poem, the madness of life can get you down so badly. It takes a really strong set of shoulders to keep you head up :0)

Great lay out also, you are a master at this!

Well done!!!

(((hugs)))

Wow! Such a intense piece. This really paints some scary images for the readers mind.
Excellent job!
Take care
Cindy

The work of a genius Michael, sheer brilliance.
I didn't know whether to laugh or be sick!
I came here for a look of your stuff, as I needed some cheering up, and my God, my cup now runneth over with happiness!
I shall return to this poem again and again, but only at the times before I eat my dinner..!

That's amazing. I love the layout, the rhyme and content. I really visualised all of it. Brilliant