CrimsonTears ( F P C D )
Great poem. Very well done, it's amazing.
Take care always,
wow....yet another great poem. I real admire your writing. I wish I could write something like this. Sometimes I feel like I just want to be dark, like, there's an evil lurking inside me that needs to escape. I want to keep reading your poems for inspiration. :) Keep it up! Seriously
Nadine ( F C )
I like it of course.....
Dianna M Tuohy ( F C )
XxBloodxLustxX ( P )
whoa this poem was awesome, ima add you to my fav's if you dont mind...
Jessica ( F C )
wow, that has got to be one of the coolest poems I've ever read. Truely a work of art. Excellent job. <3333
myxlittlexcut ( F P C D )
i really liked this poem, it was unique and very well written
EXTREGANT....thats was wonderful...i love it...the image of the words is so real...your words were perfect in describing what you wanted to show...the feeling i get from reading this is completely awsome...i feel as though i were in the arms of someone...like i felt what you wrote...
Sorry if i went in to deep..i just wanted to say that was great ! ! !
(read mine if you wish...they won't be as good at all, but i like to hear how i can improve)
*smiles slightly showing teeth*
Ashley De Atley
This poem is great....
Ilinca Milosan ( F P C D )
*jawdrop* ... *stares in awe* I love your imagination and the way you write your ideas down 5/5
Andrew Morton ( F P C D )
Wow....fantastic work - 5/5!!!!
forever in love ( F P C D )
Hmmm. intresting poem i like that
Suicidal Angel ( F )
Wow absolutely amazing wish i could write like that! keep it up!
[[Get Ya Wicked On]] ( F )
Twisted, I love it. -T. Jane
Tylor james delcourt
Thats great. good at the rhyming and it has a great story line. i luved how you ended it.
"once again he kissed me, this time i kissed back, two dark souls together, both evil and black" that was just a perfect finishing for this poem.
That was good!
nidal habash ( F P C )
The poem is captivating...every time i wanted to stop reading...it drew me back into it....this poem has magical powers...dark and sinester....very enjoyable...flows very smoothly...keep it up..."read my Arabian sands" and "Gifts of Sorrow" vote and comments appreciated. 5/5
michael g thomas
Something in the drawing in
of dark powers and lust
that captivates hearts past
their fears at much cost
and much benefit to
Lonely Juliet ( F C D )
Very beautiful Poem