Twiztid ( F C )
THAT'S A GREAT POEM....KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
Emily ( F )
wow this poem is amazing! very good use of vocabulary! keep it up!i give it a 5/5
and check out mine...it would really mean alot
Dianna M Tuohy ( F C )
I LOVE THIS POEM! I simply adore it, dahling! Best one I've read in a LONG time! 5/5
Heyy nice long poem it's very good please read some of my poems and rate my poem and comment so i can learn from what u commented :)
They Call Me Megan ( P )
You are extremely right, we humans tend to wall ourselves in our own sorrow. 'Tis sad.. Kudos =)
XxBloodxLustxX ( P )
Yea i like this poem lots, I can relate lots to the poem so its makes it even better... keep up the good work
i really liked ur poem, i can't say that i can relate but it is an AWESOME poem keep up the GREAT WORk...
it would be nice if u could read my poems and vote and comment..that would be great
---keep up what ur doing
foxyblondfemme ( F P C D )
You are a fabulous poet. what an incredible piece! Great job, keep up the good work!
God Bless and Take Care.
Great poem; really deep and meaningful. Good use of vocabulary as well. I've read many of your poems, they're all fantastic. If you have spare time, please look at some of my poems.
Nageline aka NaNa ( F C )
I liked it...
BrokenMisery ( F P C D )
wow, i really admire this piece, really well structured and creativly writeen! Keep it up!
Maisha ( F P C )
awesome poem...keep it up...
*l0$t~n~4g0t* ( P C )
hey that was really good! it reminds me of well..ME!! HAHA.. 5/5 keep up the good work
Your poem is amazing. Me and my friend are going through the same thing right now and I emailed this to her and she thought it was the best peice of poetry she has ever seen. You have so much emotion, you can feel it in there but you still managed to rhyme and make it work.
Ilinca Milosan ( F P C D )
I fell in love with it! Great poem! You really DO have amazing talent. I like all of your poems ^_^
INC ( P )
Its like i wrote it myself. amazing! kinda scary sounds just like me
kasia ( F C )
Really good poem i really liked. you have really good talent keep it up
Your poem is amazing, it gets right at the heart of what i am living right now, i wish there was some way i could let that person read this and understand what she's doing to me...im sorry for whatever happened to you that caused you to write that poem, its really good though
Its a good poem
but needs a bit of livelihood