Wow.. that was.. intense. o.o

You really let your anger show in this poem, but that's good, it lets the reader feel what you're feeling.. and it let's you get all that anger out of you and onto paper. Poems are always a good way to vent.. Venting poems always seem to be the best kind. Haha, but anyways.. sorry you had to go through this with your mother.. I can't really say I know how you feel, cause I don't.. but it must really suck.

Hang in there!

Cayce.

A really, really powerful piece, and really well expressed. The swearing adds to the piece, rather than destroying it. It flows well with the shot sentences and it was an intense read.
Keep writing, Greta.

Anger is a powerful tool with writing, and I can definately feel the anger you utilized in writing this poem. The short, burst like lines really add to the overall intensity and speed associated with anger and enhance the emotions too. Good use of cussing as well.

Overall a great example of anger being fueled into and bound into a poem. Kickass job.