Ohh wow...wot can i say...i really liked this poem...its so wonderful, the words that u used were gr8...its so fluent:D
keep up the great work hun
tk care
bree

Wow....I can't believe the way you aren't afraid to express yourself with so much explicit words of poetry. I do really like the way you write. I hope to read more poems like this. I was wondering was this based on real experience or just a poem that popped into your head? Love ya hun keeep it up!

Really good.
keep it up

That was unbelievable.i was feeling it.lol.it takes you to another place.really deep.write more like this one please:').bec.xxxx.

Wow this is great keep up the good work! Marajuana x

VerY lovinG sentenceS yoU useD herE. mE luV yR stylE oF writinG thaT keepS mE verY joY..... 5/5

luzaN

Wow powerfull and sraight to the point no messing arround here :)

ood one i like it