Comments - Viking

Everlasting ( F C D ) at 2012-04-08

I enjoyed reading the poem, but I have to be honest this part

"despite
stealing the life of a man
whom I still love, if I can.
"

Got too repetitive that I kept repeating it in my head even after I finished reading, hehe.

But the last stanza was my favorite one.

Ms Happiness ( F C D ) at 2012-04-08

Gteat poem Timothy:)
I too enjoyed reading it:)

Karla ( F P C D ) at 2012-04-08

I love the inclusion of Odin and the imagery in your piece.Always a pleasure to ead your pieces bro.

Lioness ( F P C D ) at 2012-04-09

Unique topic to write about - I love that.

Loved the rhyming - felt so easy to read.

Awesome poem.

x


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