Wow, this is really powerful, I love your wording and the way you used your expression in this, it really spoke out to me and the way I hope to praise God and follow him and be lead by his spirit!!! I think that this is a great poem for both the religious and believing followers of Christ and those who are not, wonderful poem and really spirit and it is very obvious that the holy spirit was inside of you and that you believe in God so strongly, don't give up on it, on Him, or on your writing!!!

Amen! He is the love of my life!