Comments : Soup

  • 9 years ago

    by Karla

    Gorgeous piece!

  • 9 years ago

    by WW

    Thanks for sharing. This was really uplifting in my current situation.

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Okay I gotta say one thing like senyru.... Nice comparison.

    Another thing I read this poem around two times senyru's comment is on my accounts page.... So I kinda read this thing more than seven times and all the seven times until now I read 'soup' as 'soap' and now that I'm thinking about it it makes me laugh because I kept reading your poem with soap in my mind as the comparison and I didn't understand the poem at all obviously how would I if I read it as soap.....

    Now that I know it's soup... I understand it and find this poem very well written and very well compared....

    Truthfully purple are of many varieties flavored differently... We get boiled and angry and lose all control not staying in our limits.
    We are good and worth when we are warm and loving not cold depressed and lonely.

    Beautifully written...

    I'm still laughing thinking that for so long I kept reading it as soap.
    Lol

    Keep writing and keep sharing.