youngflo ( F C D )
I don't know where i should start with this poem i love it for many reasons, one because i love to eat and it involves candy and that its so cute but the mean is so strong i love this poem if i got a dollar for every time i read this poem ill be swimming in dimonds thats how much i love this poem
Vino ( F P C D )
I love this poem. It like something a little girl would imagine. Awesome job.
HidinVictim ( F P C D )
That is so cute, i wash i could find a world like that!! very well written. 5/5
This has to be the best poem i have ever read!!!!!!! you are amazing!!!!
Thankyou so much i have now got something to read to my niece when she gets scared at night that was gourgus
sarah nicole ( C )
I like ur poem is so magical
well have a great day
It is great.
xxTaegan Emilyxx ( C D )
Wow! it made me kind of drift away for a second there!!! its awesome!
taegan - emily xx
JYOTI RANA ( F P C D )
Wow Wonderful poem. It is so sweet.......
I will give it 20/5
This is good 5/5 could u read mine and comment plz
shinigami ( D )
Wow..that was just..so beautiful. Reading it made me feel like a little kid again. Maybe if I remember it, one day I'll tell this poem to my children :]
TAYLOR ( D )
Woah, this poem is amazing :)
No comment.... but..
Lucy ( F P C D )
I enjoyed it, but did not understand, this was my comedy, very "up beat"...very not me, which does not mean much, lol, ive never had this kind of dreamland, it seems sometimes i've been even too scared to go off into any sort of dream, mine are very grim, but on the other hand there is this jealousy...a nice picture you have painted, butterflies and pixie dust...it reminds me a lot of my five year old sisters room and reality at the moment
Soulful Ensemble ( F P C D )
It does bring back memories of childhood as somebody mentioned. It flows very nicely and is nice to read.
i love this poem
it makes me think of when i was little
great job keep writing
XoXo ii COULD BE YOUR SUNSHiiNE ( P )
This poem is so cute,
i wish i could write like this.
keep up the good work..
xoxo andrea danielle.
Kelsie ( C D )
Wow. this is amazing. your ability to paint this serene,beautiful picture in my mind while still rhyming is insane. i loved reading this, it was like a little mental escape.
5/5. great job.
It was simply amazing
A i love it..keep it up...