Lovely Saffie. Great change of style. I particularly love the personification in the second verse. That whole stanza is beautiful.
Well done, and thanks for taking the challenge up so well!

Beautiful..... Just beautiful

I love the details in this poem saffie, In many ways nature can hold so much beauty within itself. Yet we choose not to see it, because we close our eyes or have our eyes closed and choose to see the darkness we hold within. I love the title first of all because it really drew me in, and second of all you rarely write nature poems, so I was interested to see what you had to say. I love how you put emotions into this poem as well. you did well. I love how you gave nature in general a voice and made it become a human or a person. It was interesting to that stand point, You painted such a lovely picture here. 5/5

Beautifully written poem that shows us to really look at the wonderful world around us to see the beauty of nature at its best. I really love this one Saffie, you should write about nature more ;)

This poem is beautiful!! Love the way it flows. Great job!! Beautifully written.

Karla 5/5

"Gentle rain reminding last year's flowers to bloom
and helping naked trees to become clothed once more,
as the grass turns a richer shade of green. "
I absolutely love this part! Great job!