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Once again, the idea of this poem was good, but you really need to check your grammar.
For The Time Well Being
^^I'm not even sure that makes sense. Just try "For the time being". It will make more sense.
A Person Came In And Ruin It Inside
^^Ruin should be ruined, and I don't think you should use inside again after it was the ending word for the line above.
Because It Was Only One Other Person
^^I think that should be "Because she was the only person"
My Love Open Up.
^^Open should be opened.
Sorry about all the corrections, but I hope they've helped a little. I think your can make your ordinary poems more better.
I like the idea of the poem. :]
And I liked this line.
"Now Its Closed And Getting Repaired Over Time."
it was deep, intense. 5/5.